Animals are considered as a beautiful creature of the environment, so it is essential for the human beings to accomplish all their indispensable requirements which can develop their body in a perfect manner, on the other hand, some individuals argue, they ought to be used to do some research and make
non- vegetarian meals but I opine that it is necessary to provide all equal rights 4th o animals.
To commence with, there is a strong bonding between the animals and humans. As, the balance of environment can be maintained just through the proper growth of distinct categories of animals. For example, in different states of India, zoos have been made for providing the protection rights to wild animals. Apart from this, proper trees as well as food are provided there to retain their connection with the surroundings then consequently these types of hard effort can generate the fruitful results in the environment.
In contrast, a few people support this notion that animals should be used for different purposes. Due to this, the researchers can be able to enhance their knowledge related to the breeds and genes of animals together with unhealthy people can easily ameliorate their conscious health by eating the animals. For instance, in kolkata state of India, the animal research lab is opened which only prefer to give the focus on tigers as well as other shops provide distinct
types of meat to the customers not only through the traditional way but also by the effective source of interent.
To conclude, sometimes the animals are become a better companion and also shower their love and affection towards humans. Although, some laws are made for their protection but still the censorship board should also try to make their life coeval as humans because nature is unstable without them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...quirements which can develop their body in a perfect manner, on the other hand, some individuals ar...
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... to be used to do some research and make non- vegetarian meals but I opine that i...
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...bonding between the animals and humans. As, the balance of environment can be main...
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... as well as other shops provide distinct types of meat to the customers not only ...
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...ecause nature is unstable without them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, still, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in contrast, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66520584988 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.8378089161 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.5 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285093462387 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111514456785 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649471485078 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121437652452 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898740452738 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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