A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including for food and research.
Although people need animal like cow for food and research, I believe that people must give more consideration to wisely protect and utilize them.
Livestock produces a good nutrition besides its function to be food research development. A big protein source is the biggest reason why utilizing them is needed. For instance, based on agriculture article in 2012, Australia became one of biggest exporter country sending more than hundred ton beef per month to around the world since they have integrated-modern livestock system being resulted by research development. Regardless, they cannot make balance ecosystem with paddy production that is decline because of grass fulfillment for cow.
As proven above, keeping the stable growth of cow population is critically required. It will lead a population interaction balance between producer and consumer level 1 to avoid broken food chain in ecosystem. For example, Indonesia has been consistently stable on agriculture production balance since 2010, which have been recorded by BBC. It is because there still have many villagers pretend to produce rice and meet in the same proportion of maintains. As a result, Indonesia can not only provide proper food but also well utilize the livestock.
To conclude, it is always good to bring well consideration into cow utilization, but fulfillment people daily nutrition needs are also important. Furthermore, people must be more careful to use and treat population of livestock for their needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the biggest'.
Suggestion: of the biggest
...e article in 2012, Australia became one of biggest exporter country sending more than hund...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...gest exporter country sending more than hundred ton beef per month to around the world ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, so, still, well, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4525862069 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9314876678 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663793103448 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2603592002 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.416666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199339377216 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678893574089 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681266501248 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139775908046 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070333701134 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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