The issue of whether animal abuse is justifiable has been a heatedly discussed topic in the recent years, and this had turned into a dilemma facing many people. Some claim that animal exploitation should be strictly prohibited, while others do not agree. Personally speaking, I would assert that humans have the right to use animals for their own benefits.
The rationality of zero-tolerance towards animal abuse should be recognized for the following reasons. To begin with, animals and humans, just as some animal rights advocates believe, should be treated equally. Despite the fact that animals cannot vocalize their thought, they still have the right to survive. Also, animals, just like humans, feel pain and show fear. For instance, many online videos show that cows would cry before they are slaughtered. They would be even paralyzed with horror when they know their death is impending. However, this does not necessarily mean that animals cannot be exploited by humans.
In fact, sacrificing some animals to meet human needs is inevitable. First and foremost, a lot of nutrients such as vitamin B and protein are derived from animals. If we do not eat meat, we will get malnutrition. In addition, we need animals in various kinds of scientific experiments. For instance, mice and monkeys are usually used in the clinical trials in order to develop a new vaccine against deadly diseases. Therefore, if we do not sacrifice a small proportion of animals for the medical development, we could no longer ensure our health.
In conclusion, both of the two views have their pros and cons, but still, I maintain that animals should be used by humans, as its beneficial effects outweigh the rest. Hence, it is worth sacrificing some animals for the overall well-being of human beings.
- Nowadays people the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make Has this become a positive or negative development 84
- Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. Why is this the case? Is it a negative or positive development? 67
- All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same numbers of vacations in a year To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
- Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every way Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop 95
- The diagram below shows the process of recycling glass bottles. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08163265306 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67826852839 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1019827878 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365432697381 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11467182804 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765589157595 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226836417445 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581461089788 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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