The growth of major cities leads to some negative effects. What problems do young people living in these cities face? What solutions for these effects?
Many people believe that the development of metropolis brings many negative impacts on young residents. The following essay will explain the problems of this trend and suggest some solutions to mitigate these potential issues.
For many young people, the main problem of living in large cities is the pressure to obtain a job. The fast-growing economic development of major cities and the higher wages in urban areas attract many workers from different parts of a country. As a result of this, the job market is highly competitive and young adults might face many difficulties to secure a good-paying position. Moreover, the pressure of finding a job may cause detriments to the mental health of young workers such as depression, anxiety and stressful.
Another problem is that the growth of major towns might lead to a dramatic increase in house price. For many young employees with an average level of monthly salary, it is a great challenge for them to have enough financial savings to purchase a property in the urban areas. Therefore, many young people decide that instead of saving enough money to purchase real estate, it is better to borrow from the bank. However, the fluctuation in borrowing rate and the down payment of a house may cause a financial burden for young city dwellers.
There are several actions that could be taken to eradicate the problems described above. The first solution is that instead of competing for a job in the city, individuals could choose a different place to develop their career. Small cities, the countryside and foreign countries, for example, are potential places for youngsters to find work. Another measure is that the government could provide incentives for young people if they decide to purchase their first home. For instance, land tax reduction and subsidized home loans provided by the government could ease the financial burden that many young home buyers are facing.
In conclusion, living in large towns may cause many negative effects to young dwellers and the government and each person could have a variety of solutions to mitigate these consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12427745665 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6382154501 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526011560694 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4308502275 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.8125 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273232084526 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876989339698 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515609860949 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152513480248 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284141956135 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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