Health
Living a hectic life, people are caught up in the flow of money and fame, which is make them foget the true value of life. Health plays an incredible role of life, having a good health, we get all; loosing health, it means loosing all.
A good health is including physical health and mental health. When your body is healthy, it means the ability of the muscles to be strong, push, pull, lift … thus doing the work of limbs comfortably like carrying, controlling machines, use tools. Besides, a person has a good health, he will have a lucid head. They focus on working, studying, have a good memory and high energy.
BÀI LUẬN TIẾNG ANH VỀ VẤN ĐỀ SỨC KHỎE
BÀI LUẬN TIẾNG ANH VỀ VẤN ĐỀ SỨC KHỎE
How to have a good health? It’s a question that has lasted for thousands of years since people became aware. However, until now, not everyone know the proper method to stay healthy. The father of Hippocrates also said, “Let food be your medicine”, there is no valuable and effective medicine by choosing carefully, smartly the foods that you and your family Daily consumption. Besides that, we should not be subjective to the effects that spiritual joys bring to health. When you are optimistic, happy, positive thinking, our body will release healthy hormones, even the hormones secreted when you are happy can also actively support in treating the disease.
To sum up, health is the most important, invaluable asset. Money, material … will help each individual’s life become more prosperous and full but does not mean it will guarantee you a good health.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... BÀI LUẬN TIẾNG ANH VỀ VẤN ĐỀ SỨC KHỎE BÀI LUẬN TIẾNG ANH VỀ VẤN ĐỀ SỨC KHỎE H...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42544541623 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658088235294 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3343478664 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400833994274 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15924470571 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.209159752313 0.0667982634062 313% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183937711793 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14686258848 0.056905535591 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... BÀI LUẬN TIẾNG ANH VỀ VẤN ĐỀ SỨC KHỎE BÀI LUẬN TIẾNG ANH VỀ VẤN ĐỀ SỨC KHỎE H...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42544541623 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658088235294 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3343478664 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400833994274 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15924470571 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.209159752313 0.0667982634062 313% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183937711793 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14686258848 0.056905535591 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.