Health is a universally accepted, fundamental human right and standing by this notion, I completely disagree that people should be held solely responsible for their health. I firmly believe that basic health care should always remain a free service to the public.
Health has been defined by the World Health Organization(WHO) as “a state of complete physical, mental and social well-being and not merely the absence of a disease or infirmary”. This definition clearly entails that the health of a person is influenced by a multitude of factors many of which are beyond the hold of the person. Factors such as accessibility to quality potable water, a balanced nutrition, a clean and green environment, timely immunisations, safe working and living conditions and access to right information on health, and so on, are beyond a person’s control, more so among populations of developing nations. These are the provisions that the government is expected to deliver to its public, irrespective of socio-economic status, age, gender or race, for the welfare of the state.
The old adage that “the body is a temple” and that one holds the responsibility of taking care of and respecting it might be valid but in today’s busy world of cut throat competitions, one is bounded by constraints of time, resources, family and work. When the struggle for survival and existence is in question, it becomes customary that health-consciousness takes a backseat. In developing and under-developed countries, wherein a large chunk of the population is poverty-ridden, this struggle is a daily affair. It is quite unfair then that these people are held responsible for their health or rather ill-health and are denied basic health care on monetary grounds.
Therefore, in my perspective, it is unwise to blame a person entirely for their health and states should be able to provide impartial, free basic health care to all their citizens.
- Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world Other people however believe that scientists have the greatest influence Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person s income The health of a person is in their own hands and they should therefore be held accountable for that Do you agree with this opinion 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2347266881 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20521849899 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575562700965 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4781827254 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392368508267 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150222038026 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109220827649 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273416258996 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875085672806 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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