Health Experts Believe That Walking Is A Good Exercise For Health. However, People Are Walking Less Nowadays. Why Is This Happening? How Can People Be Encouraged To Walk More?
It is widely said that people can improve their health by doing an exercise like walking. Meanwhile, people are avoiding walking on these days. This essay shall discuss why this is happening and suggest ways to motivate people to walk more in the ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with, there are certain factors that influence on people's lifestyle to walk less. The main reason is the technological advancement. It gives facility to the people such as cars and motorcycle to go one place to another. As a result, more and more people use these facilities in a daily basis and they forget about walking. Secondly, fast pace life affects in every direction on the public. Therefore, people do not have time to walk in their daily routine. Thirdly, the population has been increasing day by day, so the roads are constructed wider. Also, more housing is required to satisfy the citizen's lifestyle. Thus, walking places like parks are not available in the urban areas and people become less used to walk. Ergo, these are the reasons, which cause less walking.
There are certain measures, which can help to encourage people to walk more. Firstly, the government should start seminars related to the health benefits of walking. So, people can be motivated and do a lot more exercise regularly. Beside this, schools and institutions should provide knowledge about walking to their students. Consequently, children may implement and share the benefits of walking with their parents. After all, by doing these activities, people may begin to walk more on a daily basis.
To recapitulate, walking is a good exercise, but it is less used because of modern lifestyle. However, there are various solutions that can make people do more walking, which is better for the human body.
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Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, while, after all, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05102040816 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58264524431 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.3176103084 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.7142857143 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48768173494 0.244688304435 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137621257998 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944203197814 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322071045348 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642269778761 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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