It is true that people are walking less now and their health is getting worse.There are a variety of possible reasons for this, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem.
In main opinion, three main factors are blame for the way people live inactively at present. Firstly, each people have own automobile and they ususally do not walk even to the short destinations. For instance, my father ordinarily go to everywhere by car. For this reason, he is getting some health problems. Secondly,now technology is being mor convenient and it can be controlled from a distance. Because of this, people do not have to walk inside the house. Finally, majority people have sedentary lifestyle at work. It cause obesity of the office workers which ones only sit in front of computer.
People getting used the walking can certainly be improved. I believe that the change must start whith increasing price of severel transport services as a fuel, parkation or technical inspection. May be it helps that decreasing usage of private cars. At the same time, people should go to the gym hall or buy some kind of sport items ,for example, treadmill for home and they can exersice whit them. Also, employers can encourage their employees to walk by providing incentives such as flexible schedules or active workstations. In addition, individuals can be encouraged to walk by finding walking buddies or joining some sport groups that promote social interaction and healthy habits.
In conclusion, people will continue to face health problems unless incorporate walking into their daily routine and lead healthier lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10188679245 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71636261304 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649056603774 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8124065769 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426617213602 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12835610944 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909703775889 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259713894167 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478983294841 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.