People have different views about the negative impact of playing games on computer as opposed to developing them better. While there are some advantages of video games for youngsters, I believe that they might cause serious problems for their future.
The primary disadvantage of video games is many of those games promoting violence. For example fighting games have guns and blood scenes. Add to it, many children are addicted to playing electronic games. As a result, they isolate themselves from real life, in addition , not doing their homework on the time cause falling grades at school. Moreover, sitting in one place for a long time leads to several health problems like as obesity or changes in spine.
On the other hand, computer games have some advantages too. The main benefit of video games is helping children learn foreign languages. For instance, many games are based on the English language. For this reason, not-native children can learn English vocabulary while they are playing. besides, the structure of online games contributes to increasing creativity of children. Game makers did incredible work at the infrastructure of games that improves the imagination and strategic skills of young people.
In conclusion, I would argue that benefits of playing computer games for developing, it out weigh the harm caused by them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27441860465 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64735484103 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632558139535 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5974881158 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367759237758 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131466123073 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725445527265 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227999004337 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555214219165 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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