These days, it is common for every contemporary society and the modern way of thinking to perceive holidays as the chance to skip work or study, even though every holiday has deeper meaning of celebrating particular historical event or action. If I would be given a chance to invent a new holiday, I would definitely make a day of collaboration and it would last for a week and celebrated each year.
To begin with, initially there would be the forum and website, in which leaders would discuss with people their desires and plans. After setting the general wish by corresponding with every body's wants, the team is gathered online. Depending on the goal of a group there should be an itinerary of the travel to somewhere or the place where everyone would meet each other and follow the plan. Subsequently, folks even strangers would get closer to each other and at the same time exploring the new places, cultures, people and their lifestyle.
Necessarily every country should be opened and welcomed for new visitors, as everyone has unique desires nd may want to get to unsettled areas. In this case, governments should enhance safety of a journey from any of terroristical attack or natural disaster. Undoubtedly after the trip or the goal is achieved folks would need some time to recover from the process and exchange with family members their experience. This would be another reason to get closer with other relatives as well as discovering other conventions.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that this idea of a getting out of ordinary life would benefit the whole society, keeping it in peace and harmony. Also, common people would have an opportunity to open something new for themselves raising international friendship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98275862069 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73583042844 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1612899229 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.416666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203245157055 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738686396251 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056993323193 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126399610407 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453934189672 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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