Homeschooling belongs to the past and is unacceptable in the modern society .what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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...hools play an important role in everyone,s life all over the world the reason that...
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... the world the reason that school giving education and it is necessary for everyo...
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...ucation and it is necessary for everyone,s without education nobody successful.hom...
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...tion nobody successful.homeschooling was a remarkable idea in the past but today ...
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...t today modern societies do not accepted .present days it is a bit popular .so due...
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...cepted .present days it is a bit popular .so due to this reason I partly agree wit...
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...I partly agree with this statement.hence ,I shall explain about in upcoming paragr...
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...hall explain about in upcoming paragraph . To look at it one way ,in the cont...
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...g paragraph . To look at it one way ,in the contemporary era ,homeschooling i...
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...k at it one way ,in the contemporary era ,homeschooling is unacceptable because in...
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...everyone go to school and gain education .homeschooling present dont popular .in t...
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...d gain education .homeschooling present dont popular .in the past less number of peo...
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...tion .homeschooling present dont popular .in the past less number of people give e...
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... people give education to their children .however ,the present every inhabitants ...
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...ive education to their children .however ,the present every inhabitants around th...
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...ve education to their children .however ,the present every inhabitants around the...
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...getting education method is not possible for instance ;one teacher live in India...
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... not possible for instance ;one teacher live in India and they give homeschoolin...
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...ing education for their country children .it is hard nut to crack .in fact the be...
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...n for their country children .it is hard nut to crack .in fact the behind reason ...
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...untry children .it is hard nut to crack .in fact the behind reason that one teach...
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...sible teach all city students in one day .although,in case of school,it is not dif...
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...h all city students in one day .although,in case of school,it is not difficult to t...
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...s in one day .although,in case of school,it is not difficult to teach all city stud...
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...ult to teach all city student in one day .secondly,homeschooling sometimes can put...
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...ch all city student in one day .secondly,homeschooling sometimes can put harmful impact becaus...
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...t harmful impact because it is expensive .the reason that teacher go to student h...
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...mful impact because it is expensive .the reason that teacher go to student house ...
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... and teach them and receiving fees.while many times they doing partly in students...
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... students to receiving an amount of fees .they receive a different amount for diff...
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...nt students. Look at it another way,it is no doubt that homeschooling belongs ...
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...ifferent look in the developed societies .now homeschooling called online schoolin...
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...alled online schooling it is more trendy .today,s world technology more advance a...
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...lled online schooling it is more trendy .today,s world technology more advance an...
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...line schooling it is more trendy .today,s world technology more advance and it is...
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...and it is more useful in education field More student dont goto school and they u...
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...eful in education field More student dont goto school and they use their electron...
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...electronic gadgets in order.to education .they gain education online it is effecti...
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... is effective ness way to gain education .it is also one part of fatherhood school...
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...is also one part of fatherhood schooling .due to advancement of technology to easi...
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...echnology to easier life of every person,s .children Or teacher use new technolog...
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... easier life of every person,s .children Or teacher use new technology and learn ...
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...gy and learn as well as teach new things .its good method for gaining education. ...
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...or gaining education. In conclusion ,it is hard to deny that homeschooling is...
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...ion in the use of advancement technology .present time online education is part of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16223404255 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15189464289 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502659574468 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 94.0 20.2975951904 463% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 289.66392164 49.4020404114 586% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 485.25 106.682146367 455% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 94.0 20.7667163134 453% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.5 7.06120827912 460% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.01903807615 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11938403804 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829381048794 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664752096399 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742657802795 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673682621269 0.056905535591 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.9 13.0946893788 381% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.93 50.2224549098 -48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 7.44779559118 285% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.0 11.3001002004 354% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.6 10.1190380762 391% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 40.0 10.7795591182 371% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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