A horizontal city or a vertical city
Some people believe that living in a horizontal city is the best, while the opponents of this idea prefer to settle
in a vertical city. While there are benefits to residents who dwell in a city which consists of low-rise
construction, I would argue that cities with skyscrapers and high-rise buildings offer more advantages.
On the one hand, it is beneficial for residents to live in a horizontal city based on a few financial and security
reasons. Firstly, people have to pay less for building services. If residents settle in a private house, they may
save a great deal of money since they will not have to pay for building services. Secondly, living lower to the
ground is safer for inhabitants when emergencies occur. For example, if a fire starts in the home, they can
quickly escape from the dangerous areas because the building is not too high off the ground and it will not take
much time to leave.
On the other hand, it seems to me that living in a vertical city is the best choice. A city with skyscrapers will
have more space for public usage because there will be less land used for residential areas due to the amount of
people who can live in high buildings. As a result, the government would be able to use this land to build
hospitals, schools or places for entertainment. Furthermore, it is much more convenient for residents to live in
an apartment in a tall building which offers a wide range of goods and services, thanks to shopping malls and
service centers on lower floors.
In conclusion, while living in a horizontal city does have some benefits, it seems to me that the advantages of
life in a city with skyscrapers makes living in a vertical city the better choice.
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...ontal city does have some benefits, it seems to me that the advantages...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72847682119 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66216928475 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493377483444 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8583954612 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 198.0 5.01903807615 3945% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302781412093 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133402055357 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156190751595 0.0667982634062 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120588540626 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149361331604 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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