Housing and accommodation has become a major problem in many countries around the world.
- What are some of the main factors that have contributed to this problem?
- What can be done to help reducing the number of homeless people?
An enormous tribulation in numerous states across the globe is about dwelling and accommodation. This essay aims to investigate the contributing factors of this issue and also put forward a number of remedial measures in order to decrease the amount of the citizen who do not have home.
There are several primary aspects which make this difficulty to become an immense issue in various nations. First and foremost, it is caused by the lack of incomes which impoverished people are able to earn. Second but not less crucial, it is created by over population which happened in some developing countries. Last but not least, it is provoked by substandard infrastructure systems, particularly in countless rural areas.
To reduce this tribulation, there are abundant problem solvers. Firstly, the governments of those states are supposed to make a standard wage for worker in their own country. Thereby, it is capable of rendering more incomes to economically deprived workers. Secondly, the authority has to make a rule about controlling fertility by making slogan 'two children is enough for making our future better'. Lastly, the bureaucrats need to make a distinctive discussion which is merely focusing on a progressive architecture arrangement.
In conclusion, the prime determinants which make this problem to be developed are low incomes of various societies, high number of population and awful quality of architecture system. Meanwhile, there are three counter measures to abolish these troubles, such as creating well earning standard, making a regulation about birth control, and developing improved infrastructure scheme. By making all of these ideas be real, this tremendous issue will disappear from all of the states around the earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 464, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...is tremendous issue will disappear from all of the states around the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02772015235 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.085528926 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.857142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126083929686 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436709253226 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576603850313 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754630323401 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260794508799 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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