Increasing the pollution on the Earth have a hazardous impact on flora and fauna. A group of people claims that it is too late to protect them, however, some people argue that we can protect them with significant measures and can improve the situation. This essay shall discuss both the given aforementioned views. I believe that we still have time to protect them by taking appropriate actions.
On the one hand, an increment in temperature is a clear symbol of global warming. This phenomenon has a dangerous effect on every species of animal and plant. Besides, numerous species are disappeared due to environmental disruption. To epitome, species such as dodo and Sparrow are extinct and some are on the verge of extinction namely peacock, tiger, and Parrot. It is impossible to get back these species on Earth.
On the other hand, we still have a plethora of ways to protect those animals, who are on verge of extinction. Government should make a strict law to use more eco-friendly products and mitigate the use of plastic. Furthermore, people should use electrical vehicles instead of petroleum vehicles which is environmentally friendly. Government should provide a subsidy to encourage people to use more and more eco-friendly products. In exemplification, governments donating subsidies to the people for using solar panels to generate electricity. Moreover, people must avoid personal vehicles and use more public transport which will save money and the environment. Government should allocate some funds for wildlife to enhance the quality of life of animals.
To close the discussion, humans have miscellaneous ways to protect animals and the government should implant a law to use the more eco-friendly property.
- Today more and more full time university students focus on other activities rather than spend a lot of time studying Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- In some countries there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school Do you think the advantages of this overweigh the disadvantages 73
- Health experts believe that walking is a good exercise for health However people are walking less nowadays Why is this happening How can people be encouraged to walk more 56
- Today more and more full time university students focus on other activities rather than spend a lot of time studying Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem Others believe that effective measure can be taken to improve this situation Discuss both view and give your opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28985507246 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03317787674 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56884057971 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3839331062 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8823529412 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185330654889 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581387814939 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660768292922 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11173390204 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606591791403 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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