It is an undeniable truth to say that the internet shrunk the world. The Internet provides us numerous benefits and it the best invention in the history of mankind. Some believe that newspapers are the best way to get information about what is happening around the world, while others think that the internet is the best way to get news and updates regarding news things. This essay will discuss both the aforementioned Views. I, however, believe that the internet is the best way to get information updates.
On the one hand, we are living in a global village where we can talk, and get information from any corner of the world. Reading news is very essential for everyone as it provides plenty of updates and news. Moreover, with the help of the internet people can purchase any e-newspaper without any cost and very convenient way. In this digital era, everyone has an internet connection on his or her phone so it is far better for them to read news online.
On the other hand, purchase newspapers are getting a harmful effect on the environment as a plethora amount of trees are cutting down due to the manufacturingnewspapersaper. Furthermore, the cost of the newspaper is a shoulder on the public as they have to pay for it. However, it employs thousands of people, we should not ignore the fact of deforestation.
To recapitulate, I reiterate to say that the internet has myriads of benefits and people can learn new things, get daily updates and information from it.
- Now big cities have many problems What are these problems Do you think the government should encourage city residents to move to small cities and towns 73
- Pollution of rivers lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment What are the possible causes of water pollution and what effects does this have on animal life and human society 73
- Some people do not go directly to college but travel or work for a short time Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 56
- A recent newspaper article report that a 14 year old boy who seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streets instead of sent to the prison do you think this is right Or the young criminals should be sent to jail 73
- Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change their jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80078125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05131637432 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5234375 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7250793711 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5384615385 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300878335862 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965789132963 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847213845056 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169631835031 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945613507611 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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