Human beings do not need to eat meal in order to maintain good health because they can get all their food needs from meatless products and substitute vegetarian diet is as healthy as diet containing meat argue for or against the opinion above .
Good health is boost up energy of humanity for hardworking. If, health is wealthier so, human beings easily grow up in the environment. I argued that a vegetarian nutrients is healthy and dietary food has played crucial role to keep up health as contrast to non vegetarian food sources.
To begin with, the vegetarian food are rich in protein, carbohydrates and so on. The dietary product has categorised in energy building food. If, people have been eat milk green leafy veggies than meat product so, it is plethora of beneficial for mankind. Furthermore, protein rich food and fibre food have been proper nourishment Osborn baby and pregnancy woman.
In addition to this, in the modern scenario, a numerous critical diseases has occur in the environment . A mankind eat different sort of fruits and vet feel is better whether, eat a non vegetarian product which is also have bad impact on human health because meat food is responsible for incline sever illness. The best epitome of this is the Hindustan times conducted survey by health organization four out of ten people suffered from swin- flu disease to ate a meat of pig animal. Moreover, the balanced diet of vegetarian food broccoli has similar vitamin as meat . According to doctor, human will eat broccoli which is less fat content and it is controlled various disease such as high blood pressure as well as cholesterol .
To conclude, a good balanced dietary food has play significant role to cure illness so, eat a lot of dietary veggies and fruits for good healthier body.Everyone say that health is wealth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'nutrient'?
Suggestion: nutrient
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'eaten'.
Suggestion: eaten
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'disease'?
Suggestion: disease
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Message: Use past participle here: 'occurred'.
Suggestion: occurred
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'eats'.
Suggestion: eats
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Suggestion: had
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'meat'.
Suggestion: meat
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Suggestion: Everyone
...gies and fruits for good healthier body.Everyone say that health is wealth.
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'saith', 'says'.
Suggestion: saith; says
...fruits for good healthier body.Everyone say that health is wealth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, sort of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97727272727 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74572964203 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6031424551 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.076923077 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259673458916 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918966642553 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521807675433 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15000440711 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407091825327 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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