The idea of going overseas for university study is an exiting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties student inevitably encounters living and studying in different culture.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Studying in another country is believed to will confront students with various difficulties in terms of studying and struggling with alien culture. I definitely disagree with mentioned view due to compelling reasons which will be elaborated. In this essay I am going to put force some reasons to support my idea before arriving at conclusion.
Az many People have noticed, there are numerous merits which are brought by studying in oversea‘s universities for students, destination and port countries. First and foremost human instinct can get accustomed to various culture, religious and notions especially young human who many features have not stabilized in their mind and behavior. When these persons enter in new and sometimes rigorous circumstances they will learn many effective experience to tackling problems such as soleness or financial dilemma. Moreover not only have studying in prestigious universities with best tutors worthwhile experience for person,but also living in development countries is golden opportunity for students to updating with modern life. Therefore, many advantageous can be achieved in this situation.
Secondly, both port and destination countries have gain via abroad studying. Although many problems may be created by foreign countries, when students want to comeback to their home, they will have many precious experience about living alone in alien countries, how efficiently can they facing problems and more important one remarkable effective knowledge for improving own countries situation.
In conclusion, with considering above advantageous, studying and living in foreign country is significant issue which is prevalent in nowadays modern world. This important society phenomenon should be continued among nations for progression in different fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82954545455 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98757518511 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6859578413 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.25 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228493456485 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781784631141 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626858571588 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129342594232 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384218129794 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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