It is often argued that if a goad satisfy the customer needs it gets bought without advertising. It can be true in some conditions but not in all. There are some materials which require publicity to attract people whereas others do not.
First of all, the company sends its products to the market through marketing since it helps the world to know there product. With the help of social media influencers or movie actors they launch there product. This helps to reach in a wide manner and also the people can know that it existed. Due to this type of marketing the cost of the product increases and also sometimes others buy by trusting influencers other than product. For instance, mobile phone manufactures spend millions on advertisement due to this the price also increases on smart phones.
Secondly, if the product maintained good quality and also has durability the company does not require others to spread the product. Moreover if one finds the material is good to its budget they eventually recommend it to there family or friends. If we consider Zara a clothing company who does not spend a single penny in launching there product but end up being the monopoly in luxuzary materials.
To sum up, we need to know the product so the company should bring to us but after it reached and all of us trust it there will be no need to push it into audience
- In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sports themselves Discuss this view and give your own opinion 67
- If a product is good or it meets people needs people will buy it so advertising is unnecessary and no more than an entertainment to what exnted do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think that students who achieve the best academic results should be rewarded Others believe it is more important to reward students who show improvement Discuss both views and give your opinion
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a wide manner" with adverb for "wide"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...unch there product. This helps to reach in a wide manner and also the people can know that it ex...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...t require others to spread the product. Moreover if one finds the material is good to it...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will be no need to push it into audience
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65560165975 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48825688465 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580912863071 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5421895597 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178514339844 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588020132739 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394935773329 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101677836133 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237763809612 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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