It is deemed by many people that, when a product is already getting sold in market without any concerns, promotions to those products would be just considered as an entertainment. I completely disagree with the statement, as advertisements often play a vital role in enhancing products sale and revenue in the market.
Firstly, Advertisements are one contributing factor for any company’s success. When a company develops or manufactures a product it entails a medium through which people can be made aware of that and the benefits it offers. In such scenarios advertisements comes to its best aid. It is also often argued that, if a product’s sale is good in the market, it hardly require any promotions .However ,i firmly reckon that promotions should be continued ,especially when there are new up-gradations to the product to have long lasting results and the increased sales for the product . To exemplify , there are several products in the market which are the default choice for people for many decades , such as tooth pastes, soaps, and many more, but ,with advancement in innovations ,companies adapt the new strategies by launching the same products with different flavors to attract the customers and re promote them .which ultimately fetches them great success.
On the other hand , Its worthy to note ,that not always commercials are meant to entertain people or promote their product ,but also sometimes, they help their customers from using certain faulty products. To add an example, recently a famous automobile company has did a promotion asking asked all their customers to reach out to them to get their equipment replaced , as they have found a faulty or a defective equipment in the vehicles they have sold .
To conclude , promotions are indeed powerful source to market a certain product with out which it would be challenging task for companies to reach a success point.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, as to, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15806451613 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94855328997 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574193548387 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3407199458 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.9 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117159306419 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569587681841 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335005918066 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762420214521 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470101028109 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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