Media is a vital mode through which people in every nook and corner of the world familiarize themselves with the ongoing issues around them. However, there is a debate that media, nowadays focuses more on problems and risks compared to other optimistic progressions occurring in the country. As a consequence this is said to have adverse effect on the people and community. I agree that media in this contemporary society, is keenly inclined towards dispersing any news for popularity than considering its facts.
To begin with, there is no harmony in the news that is published by two different broadcasters. Most of the telecom sectors are owned by the politicians and the news is tailored as per their requirements, showcasing only the bright side of the party. For instance, the daily reports sent to the public are flooded with a party's achievement or about the blunders committed by the opponent side, and there is no or minimal section to expose or appreciate the achievements that are accomplished in various sectors.
On the other hand, current news is full of the various crimes and abductions that are happening in the society. To an extent, that illuminates people and provides them awareness, but the impassive way of portraying an issue creates fear in the minds of people. This in turn results in lot of chaos in the community, resulting in people worrying to extend a conversation to the neighbors, additionally the trust factor is slaughtered.
To conclude, present media focuses more on the target rating point and fails miserably to circulate neutral information. Having said that, media is depicted as the face of the country, hence it should be healthy enough to express and spread lot of positive happenings around the country, that creates a unambiguous atmosphere for the individuals to survive.
- Some people say that holding sport competitions cause many troubles, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- Some people believe that sleeping is ony the relaxing method which allows people to get enough relief.Others believe that physical activities such as playing games and exercises also provide enough relaxation.Discuss both the views and provide your opinio 84
- In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in the water, so people think they should be banned.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people think that watching sport is wastage of time during leisure time. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some parents believe that reading books for entertainment is a waste of time for children and they think that their children should only read serious educational books.What is your opinion? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...tted by the opponent side, and there is no or minimal section to expose or appreci...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...enings around the country, that creates a unambiguous atmosphere for the individu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9109200531 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3727081089 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.416666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149135142169 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466650895013 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328454920513 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798907403958 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494109424106 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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