Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration?
To what consequences can it lead?
Nowadays Immigration becomes the biggest desire in our society. Most of the people want to relocate to different countries. This essay will examine the main causes and the consequences of immigration.
In my view, the vital reason would be the desire of living a life with a higher standard. Throughout the world, people always look forward to making sure a secure life with a stable income. As a result, they started trying hard to cross to get into a high economical country. Though, getting paid a handsome amount is not only the problem of becoming an immigrant. Sometimes people want to live their life in a peaceful country, A country which will not conflict war so frequently with other countries. That is how, they want to make sure themselves by thinking in their mind that their next generation will have a secure life by getting good employment opportunities, a good education system, good social and political rules.
However, In reality, sometimes what the immigrate had expected before entering their destination country does not match at all. As a result, It causes more problems than it solves. It leads to produce so many challenges for both parties, immigrants and the destination country. First of all, most of the refugees do not get their placement because of lack of expertise, language barriers & not getting enough time for adapting to a new environment. Secondly, not all refugees get a proper place to live, good food, and great health care. so, Their life is still in danger even after crossing the border.
To conclude, I think most of the cases people immigrate to have a better prospect life. Though, life after immigrants may not led the expectation. so, its very important to think more wisely about the outcomes of all the possible way before leaving their own country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to get into a high economical country. Though, getting paid a handsome amount is not ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... However, In reality, sometimes what the immigrate had expected before entering their dest...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 539, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...live, good food, and great health care. so, Their life is still in danger even aft...
^^
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...immigrants may not led the expectation. so, its very important to think more wisel...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, i think, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95723684211 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67413180661 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3267711449 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7222222222 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116819254687 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398492791834 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539756130538 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825175734532 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437402457547 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.