Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
Many people are migrating to english speaking countries and its impact on the society is very negative and can lead country to some bad consequences. Where as i believe that people moving to abroad because they looking for bright future and immigrating for people can harm our over all economy. I will discus it in details. Migrating to commonwealth countries is normal now days for people and has a very major affect on societies as well. Students of universities are moving to abroad in very high number to educate their self from best universities in abroad and make their self able to find well paid job through which they can make their future more brighter. For example, friend of mine went to uk to complete his masters degree form london university after completing his studies he will get 3 years post study work visa to find jobs and will be able get settle their. Moving to abroad can be beneficial in many ways. In addition migration to abroad can also be harmful for our nations in terms of economic areas which every Asian countries are facing now day, because of people leaving their birth countries and moving to abroad in search of better life style. For instance in a news paper was showing that according to FIA in last 18 months 223k nationals of Pakistan has moved to abroad in search of jobs and took a lot of money out of Pakistan which is very harmful for the economic growth of the country and can put Pakistan in economic problem. In conclusion, maigration of people has an serious impact on society and can take us to some serious results as well. From my perspective, immigration need to be stop because it is totally destroying countries allover. Moving to other countries can be beneficial to people but it is worse for their countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74433656958 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69229212044 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53074433657 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.2277391285 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.888888889 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3333333333 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111755993266 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586415529318 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372327132519 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111755993266 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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