Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nation. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the needier nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
education is crucial for the overall development of humanity. In most countries, both private and public institutions provide education. some people believe that the government should be the only provider of education in a country. I completely disagree with this statement. this essay will discuss the importance of having both private and government educational institutes.
when educational institutions are run by the government, every student will be able to access them. that is because government institutions provide education for free or at concessional rates. In India, for example, the government runs schools and colleges all over the country. students who are below the poverty line can study at these institutions without paying any fee. The fee charged from other students is also nominal compared to the fee charged by private institutions. Obviously, there are several benefits when governments run educational institutes.
however, the government cannot be the exclusive provider of education. The government has numerous other responsibilities as well. also, there is a limit to the amount of money the government can invest in education. that is why it is important to allow private companies also to provide education. Of course, these institutions are unlikely to provide free education. however, they still provide quality education and students who can afford to pay the fee can enroll in these institutions. In a way, these institutions also take some load off government institutions. If everyone had to go to government schools, it would reduce the quality of education because of the inadequacy of resources. also, when private schools operate in a country, the competition among them will indirectly improve the quality of education.
In conclusion, private education is not free but it is important to allow private companies to run educational institutes because the government alone cannot provide education to all the students in the country. also, the presence of private educational institutes in the country will increase the quality of education because of the competition between them.
- Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country To what extent do you agree with this view 78
- People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food 79
- Now a days international tourism is the biggest industry It creates tension rather than understanding between people from different countries To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic social and commercial perspectives What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 8.3376753507 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54294478528 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11610093892 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450920245399 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8433626012 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1363636364 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118559125527 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476972592583 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413239958178 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884850432458 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243279436231 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.26 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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