With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people.
Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the improvements in today's health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people - in this point of my view, I am agree with this opinion, moreover the society will be able to cope with increase in numbers of elderly people today and managed it properly.
Elder people are like a child, they can not maintain properly in there life easily, that is the reason for the health care need to assistance to them for good survival with the society.
In the other hand, some elder person are maintain their time perfectly, at that time society are not more anxious regarding these person and age is the only number for them, which is not impact on their smart life.
Most of the elder person can keep whole entire circle is very smooth, where these person are not need any help from other, however in their oldest time is really poor without caring of the health care. Some elder people have lots of health issues, they can take different medications for these, after getting all of these support the people can stay more well and health issues are not problematical for their age. In the matter of fact, many medical issues are facing at that time like diabetics, kidney diseases, heart and liver related diseases and some are also effected by cancer, all of these diseases are take of by health care and the society are bound to take care of these illness person. If the sickness is found on primary level then it can be recover very properly and the people can keep well in their rest of life, which can be possible only for the interactive social people.
Additionally, some elder person are not need get help from other people, they are save their earnings for their oldest time, also these people are more conscious about their future health issues and they try to get care from the health care center when they were young and worked for their career. Some people are hardworking very much also proper maintain their BMI, in this type people are not face any physical issues when they are getting old, also they are take all regular checkup from the medical center, don not want to avoid it by any chance. I see lots of business magnet people and higher management of the office are more knowledgeable about these type of issues, So they can keep well to go extra mile in their life.
Overall, My opinion is that, the older people are need to take the heath care support from the beginning of their service life, then it can be good for them to assist them being handsome all time and society have the responsibility to give the possible way to love.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...people - in this point of my view, I am agree with this opinion, moreover the society...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
...n the other hand, some elder person are maintain their time perfectly, at that time soci...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'these people', 'these persons'?
Suggestion: this person; these people; these persons
... society are not more anxious regarding these person and age is the only number for them, wh...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'these people', 'these persons'?
Suggestion: this person; these people; these persons
...ole entire circle is very smooth, where these person are not need any help from other, howev...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...very smooth, where these person are not need any help from other, however in their o...
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Line 7, column 515, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at time like diabetics, kidney diseases, heart and liver related diseases and som...
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Line 7, column 679, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this illness' or 'these illnesses'?
Suggestion: this illness; these illnesses
...d the society are bound to take care of these illness person. If the sickness is found on pri...
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Line 9, column 41, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...Additionally, some elder person are not need get help from other people, they are sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, then, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58441558442 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10486215712 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437229437229 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.0087674561 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 192.545454545 106.682146367 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40816456024 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190774330744 0.084324248473 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159153747306 0.0667982634062 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271371550424 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179062213464 0.056905535591 315% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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