Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The advertising is really successful at persuading us to buy things.
If we are not want to see any advertisement but it comes to our eyes whenever we are using the internet.
Some people not agree with the opinion because of there are not willing to reading newspaper or browsing different inter page, just only see the YouTube, when advertisement time at that time they are just forwarding the video where the advertisement are stop.
Now a days advertisement not only see on the television, but also it has different way to coming day by day. All smart company are set their advertisement on the website, social media pages, groups, e-newspaper also different types of e-media. In this point of my view, if people doesn't like to see advertisement however, the advertisement will come by automatic and people will click on the advertisement by their absent mind and then the product website page become open in their computer or smartphone. So their have different type of interesting offers, discounts etc. In that case, people are encourage to buy the product even though they no need to buy the product.
Which people are not wants to see the advertisement at that time people think all of the people ignore the advertisement but reality is that, some people are waiting for the advertisement where they can buy product with discount or fascinating offers. In fact, people like o see advertisement which product they need to buy in future. After seeing advertisement some people ignore the advertisement but most of the people like advertisement for buying product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...eo where the advertisement are stop. Now a days advertisement not only see on the telev...
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Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...re the advertisement are stop. Now a days advertisement not only see on the telev...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ia. In this point of my view, if people doesnt like to see advertisement however, the ...
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Line 7, column 609, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
...etc. In that case, people are encourage to buy the product even though they no need to...
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Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...advertisement at that time people think all of the people ignore the advertisement but rea...
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Line 9, column 325, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...tisement which product they need to buy in future. After seeing advertisement some people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99621212121 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95413507251 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5271917993 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.909090909 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340489598913 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15550732895 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970452713034 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20842144311 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809357357687 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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