With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?
People live in a new version of the world, their lives are dependent on energy more than old times. Our business, daily and entertainment lives connect with it. Nowadays, the demand that correlates with human needs such as energy is increased. Therefore, some people claim that undiscovered areas of world should be opened up to access for more resources, while others allege that it could be hazardous for future.This is a contradictory issue, and I support the second side.
Firstly, access to unexplored areas lead to some environmental damages. We have already brought damage to the local ecosystem that we currently live. When we think about undiscovered areas, they cannot resist the human effects. The oil spill can damage heavily to the animals and plants in these sensitive sites. For this reason, damaging to these areas is too much risky and these kind of practices should be banned. In addition to this, instead of entering this untouched sites, alternative renewable energy sources such as solar, water, wind etc. can be used. Correspondingly, our world can hold against negative effects of time. Also, governments can encourage the companies which want to use undiscovered areas’ sources to these alternative ways and they should protect these sites, too.
Overall, giving access permission to the unused areas for resources could be dangerous to the live on earth. It has been shown that there are many cons these kind of acts. If we want to have long time in this world, saving undiscovered areas is highly recommended.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'as for', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229965156794 0.247107548796 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.146341463415 0.15552993741 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.118466898955 0.0946569551029 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0452961672474 0.0437536398559 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101045296167 0.122223957237 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0383275261324 0.0403219363162 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71804251292 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0418118466899 0.0326786765898 128% => OK
Particles: 0.00348432055749 0.00163938923432 213% => Too many particles.
Determiners: 0.0836236933798 0.0861751148067 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0348432055749 0.0214082191602 163% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0104529616725 0.0119246538136 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1543.0 1933.38276553 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 316.052104208 80% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09881422925 6.10592293882 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20519365927 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369047619048 0.37474360046 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22619047619 0.284197041944 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.203843217982 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130952380952 0.137313986986 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71804251292 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.560935902166 110% => OK
Word variations: 65.6360576833 60.7401812628 108% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0911823647 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.75 20.7725350517 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3073395468 49.5273876611 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1194029851 93.4120437189 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0447761194 15.2821509519 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.716417910448 0.594174754866 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.39078156313 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01102204409 60% => OK
Readability: 38.369047619 49.1922392462 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.58208955224 1.69127372897 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.450571653803 0.332604825255 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0805614993657 0.102734651613 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0515122605774 0.0668474354756 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.416854434815 0.534917948617 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138058653286 0.148666948902 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147219498741 0.13441755203 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822717422872 0.0742828286743 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330798542323 0.324241079732 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0681168304606 0.0640056729886 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325009291663 0.22793763319 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257123726738 0.0582452615562 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41883767535 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.88977955912 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.60220440882 77% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.493987976 95% => OK
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.0 Out of 9