An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
As technology advanced, it has become more and more popular among purchasers for buying products via online. I believe that online market can demonstrate its more positive sides than downsides in terms of affluent choices and time consuming.
To begin with, the first and perhaps the most significant advantage belongs to purchasing goods by internet is that there is abundance on choices. Since each productions which were produced recently might be put on the shopping sites. As a result of this, consumer can opt to the things according to their needs. At the same time, it can be affordable to compare the productions in terms of their qualities, colors, costs and other features. Another benefit obtained from online shopping is it does not require a lot of time which spend on buying something. The people who are occupied on their works and daily tasks are satisfied more this shopping way. Even the good which buyer is going to purchase is delivered by manufacturers.
Notwithstanding, there are some drawbacks which are carried out by online market. One minus side is the features of goods exaggerate by advertisements in these online sites. Consequence, consumers might be deceived and it causes to waste their money. Furthermore, the orders of people which are chosen on the internet site may not be appropriate their tastes when they receive them.
Taking everything into consideration, in the contemporary society, individuals have strong demand for buying things by online, from my standpoint, it has a number of benefit rather than negative sides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... is that there is abundance on choices. Since each productions which were produced re...
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Message: Did you mean 'wasting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: wasting
...nsumers might be deceived and it causes to waste their money. Furthermore, the orders of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16535433071 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86500583185 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9257893596 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0857029711841 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254998278449 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032623339669 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551588914856 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218328207954 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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