An increasing number of people are choosing plastic surgery. Why do people choose to change the way they look? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is said that artificial surgeries are growing in importance. There are several reasons why this is the case. I believe that this trend is both positive and negative.
I can understand why some people choose to make some changes in their appearance or body through plastic surgeries. One of the main reasons for the growing number of beauty operations is that many individuals want to look better in front of others. Some people especially young ones do not have enough confidence in their face or body or what they are. Such folk usually compare themselves with others, for example, celebrities. As a result, they feel inferior to them and make their own decisions to undergo some plastic surgeries to look more beautiful even if such operations are dangerous for them. Another reason is congenital defects. Some people are suffering from some born imperfections, such as cleft lips. These people select such surgeries to have a normal face like others.
I believe that plastic surgeries are good as long as they are used in the right way. Nowadays we can see that most individuals, ranging from women to men overuse artificial surgeries by doing some risky surgeries, such as breast augmentation, liposuction. This is because they want to look fit while for having a beautiful body they can easily do exercise to lose weight or improve the size of their breast. Unfortunately, even many celebrities who are very famous in their own right and are role models for people are addicted to these surgeries. The best example of this case is Michael Jackson who was suffering from the negative consequences of multiple nose surgeries until he was alive. I believe that the existence of such operations is positive only when people want to improve some of their defects that are hereditary and they have no choice but to do them.
In conclusion, in my view, plastic surgeries are becoming in higher demand for several reasons. Depending on what these surgeries are used for, this development can be both positive and negative.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95894428152 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68154198828 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9565908571 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273718340246 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796011846836 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518641844021 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147183132892 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599626967494 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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