Many countries are experiencing population growth and need more homes. Should these new homes be constructed in existing cities or should new towns be built in the countryside?
Overpopulation is a growing problem in many countries. The question is that to provide enough accommodation for the growing population, whether new buildings should be constructed in the existing cities or not. I believe that new homes should be built in new towns.
I can explain why it would be better for officials to build new buildings in the countryside. If governments construct new houses in the new towns, they will be able to provide more job opportunities for people in different age groups. This is because more companies and industries will be transmitted or built to develop the new areas. This situation can easily solve the problem related to the unemployment and oversupply of labour.
In addition to this, the construction of new apartments in the existing cities can have some negative consequences for both people and the environment. Nowadays, the introduction of advanced technologies in transportation and way of living has led to the dispersal of families, and many individuals are encouraged to live in big cities to progress in their lives. This condition has caused many cities to become too busy. As a result, if governments decide to build more homes in the cities, they need to destroy more green spaces or cut trees and plants to provide the necessary lands for construction. Additionally, overcrowding in big urban areas can intensify the problem related to traffic congestion which can lead to increased air pollution and endanger the health of individuals.
In conclusion, in my view, it is more rational that new buildings to be built in the new towns. In this way, people not only can have a better quality of life but also can keep themselves healthy from pollution.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06007067138 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06523202096 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533568904594 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9777646343 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354137415973 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136142911986 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131116890869 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241986509216 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118396011528 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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