An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their life time. Is this positive or negative development?
It is true that, these days, there are more and more people choose to not settle down in one place but move to many locations to have new workplaces and accommodation. From my perspective, I firmly believe that this tendency could have both positive and negative development for many people in all around the world.
On the one hand, there are several potential problems may occur when people change their job and residential places. The most important thing is that citizens may have to spend a significant amount of time to get harmonized with new living conditions in the new neighborhood, which can have some disadvantages such as high rate of crimes, social disorders, or weather differences. Moreover, in some cases, people have to find a new job and face up with unemployment sometime, which might lead to the difficulty for people to pay for some fundamental demand like education, accommodation and transportation. Last but not least, when switching a career, people will lack of experienced time and have to make more effort to get promoted as well as balance work and life.
On the other hand, it is true to say that relocating to a new place and changing the career can help people have many beneficial things. First of all, human will have opportunity to get access to new living standards such as higher educational conditions, much more high-quality services and more stable political situations. For example, some people choose to immigrate to an affluent country that they can approach economic and cultural development, enhance their knowledge and assure the brightest future for their children. Not stopping at this point, numerous citizens are inclined to move other country which enables them to find high-paid jobs and get promotion, gain higher position in their career path due to the fact that people might have felt that their current jobs are not in accordance with their passions and satisfactions.
In conclusion, many advantages and disadvantages can be outlined from the fact that an increase in number of people resettle in other living places and have career changes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08645533141 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8290700949 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541786743516 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2318928109 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.454545455 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5454545455 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4545454545 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274305638872 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105537994426 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598804392271 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161407157868 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304628891264 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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