An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their lifetime Is this a positive or negative development

It is true, in the present scenerio more and more people cannot settle down in one place but they are move another part of city and area. I believe there are lot of reason behind these situation. So, I explain pros and cons on the statement and I give fully fam ins and outs with example in the following paragraph.
Elementary, I think there are a lot of merits and demerits back of each things. First and foremost, there are many people changes their job because of many factor such as not enough salary, not good relationship between employers, do not get promotion in your field. So, human beings do not obtain satisfaction with these items . Another statement, changes of residence is very common thing nowadays days. Many time not get good neighbours, lack of transportation, the atmospher is not conducive, poor education quality and so on. Therefor, these factors do work behind in phenomenon.
To contrary, there are negative impact on people if they do transfer their house or job again and again. To commence with, people cannot achieved better working experience from company and they cannot increasing their salary. Time and again, they can be cope many inconvenience tools. For instance, people go another City or town at that time they find a new apartment and after they become a very Tradious. To Capit all, their children can be very hercules task to make new friends.
In final words, my opinion on par with Idea that many drawbacks outweigh positive development. All people should survive on one place and they should be make life very joyfull.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'made'?
Suggestion: made
...survive on one place and they should be make life very joyfull.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for instance, i think, such as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84701492537 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55493396519 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0940143579 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1875 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171492882747 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495743047884 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440942789318 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905569274002 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452597378366 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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