Some people think sport is important to society Other however feel it is nothing more than leisure activity Discuss both views and give opinion

Sports utmost most essential for the mental as well as physical development of an individual. I think all type of sports are very popular among the people, however games are totally changed than past. Both are play very inevitable role in the society, but another side of people believe it is a leisure activity. I explain both side and give my opinion in the upcoming paragraph.

Initially, in the present scenerio all the children play both outdoor and indoor activity. People think some outdoor sports such as cricket, football, volleyball, basketball and so on. However, people play cricket on an International and Domestic level. In addition, many times many group community do organisation Cricket tournament in the city. Outdoor sports become a part of our routine life because which become a keep body healthy and fit. Besides, the new advancement technology changed some games like change chess, Carrom, cards and so on new technology is involve in the some games, however this type of games people can become a mentally fit. I believe sports and games work as a stress buster. For instance, Ronaldo is a player of football which popular in the whole world and play football in the all time which can be better earn as well as remaining very feet.

On the other hand, many people are against the sports and games because of which believe it is a leisure activity. If children are very interested in the sports and games that they can not better focus on your study. Many times, people play computer games from a very long time so it can be damage your eyes. If children keep more attention on your study, therefore they can be become a great future. Parents thinking it is a waste of time and money.

In conclude, it can be said that the issue of sports and games are very necessary role play in our life and i believe it is a one type of exercise of the daily life.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67771084337 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44477952879 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469879518072 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7251747154 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2777777778 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185727263749 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648223026527 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511704206896 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116787143968 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674360472522 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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