An increasing number of people choose to travel abroad.To what extent do you think the problems brought by international travel outweigh its advantages
Indubitably,visiting abroad has become incresingly popular these days, a significant number of people choose to travel foreign countries,though it has some problems, this essay will critique both aspects with pertinent reasons before forming my resonable conclusion, in my opinion advantages certainly surpass its disadvantages.
To commence, traveling abroad has adverse effects majorly in two ways. Firstly,today international travelling is doing by jet planes,cruze ships and private superyachts ,thus it is more expensive for indeviduals rather than they travel native areas,in result in heavy burden on budjet. Moreover, trend of visiting foreign hotspot has become popular nowdays perticularly in young generation, in order to acomplish their abroad dreams youngsters adopted antisocial activities in result,behind the bars. Secondaly,it is detrimental for environment in various ways, for example enormouse carbon fumes produced by jetplanes in upper atmosphere resulted in greenhouse gas therefore,travel abroad hotspots are not only out of budjet but also deplorable for nature.
However,despite being such a expensive travelling it is more than beneficial in two rudimentry ways firstly,people could learn foreign cultures and tradition also they staying there for a months it can be helpful for them not onle learn their native language but also their festivals, to exemplify,visiting china tourists can be able to speak chinese in addition,they can enjoy their traditional tommato and mud festivals.Secondly,public can feel strange weather which would be more spectacular for them,for example,freezing winter would be unbelievable experience for tourists.
In conclusion,i recapitulate that although,travelling global countries have immense advantages for inhabitants in order to adopt experince and enjoyment,it has become dangerous for juvenials also injurious for nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.19696969697 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75635366246 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689393939394 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.150590345 49.4020404114 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.714285714 106.682146367 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.7142857143 20.7667163134 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.4285714286 7.06120827912 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167019677094 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944311299366 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508629290822 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110539855265 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558519254365 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 13.0946893788 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.54 50.2224549098 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.27 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.57 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.