With an increasing number of people eating fast food, which, if eaten too regularly, can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely. To what extent do you agree?
Over the past few years, fast food consumption has experienced an upward trend, which may cause detrimental effects on well-being problems. A group of individuals argues that the only way to address this issue is to ban it thoroughly. From my point of view, I concur with the opinion aforementioned.
To commence with, it is true that takeaway food is unhealthy for it contains a considerable amount of sugar, saturated fats and grease. Therefore, if a person consumes this type of meal regularly, they might be diagnosed with long-term illnesses such as diabetes, obesity or exacerbatingly, heart disease. Moreover, some fast food chains usually prepare meal appeared on the menu with low-quality ingredients and keep their kitchen unclean. For instance, according to a source of newspaper, a customer who suffered from poisoning had sued a branch of Vietnam Lotteria after eating their dirty fried chicken. Even worse, another consumer also found a cockroach in her ordered meal providing by this company, completely losing her appetite afterward.
Despite these adverse impacts of takeaway meals on physical condition, they are always appealing to busy office workers for their “fast” concept, economical price, and highly addictive tendency. In order to quickly address the problem, shutting down all fast food services is the most effective solution. By applying it into practice, it will decrease diet-related problems among consumers, hence establishing a healthy lifestyle since adults have to prepare their home-cooked cuisines to bring to their workplace. As a result, fewer people will have to pay for medical expenses to cure such disorders, therefore they can save money for other aspects of life, improving living standards is an example.
In conclusion, fast meals pose a potential threat to their consumers’ health, and I agree with the opinion of forcing closure to all the fast food restaurants to create a moderate way of living for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37741935484 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90870629671 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68064516129 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8431845401 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.230769231 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174642445256 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563703961486 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400025924308 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108362119132 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350107905508 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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