An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
Nowadays, more and more well-educated people are moving to other industrialized countries in search of a better life, and admittedly, it brings with it a whole new set of challenges for both individuals and society; therefore, it is absolutely essential to take appropriate measures to address the issue successfully.
To begin with, one major problem associated with this matter appears to be that the more highly skilled people break away from their homeland, the more difficulties the abandoned country is expected to be encountered with. That is to say, such a social phenomenon is bound to occur in less developed countries, meaning they are losing their talented persons who have been allocated so much investment to nurture. Consequently, they are host countries which make the most of such well-rounded people. Furthermore, the individuals themselves are not apart and most likely to be confronted with some major handicaps. To put it simply, when migrating to a foreign country, they end up in an environment with a different language and culture which in turn is a serious hardship to overcome. A good illustration of this is an Arabic person who tends to have a totally different belief and culture form western ones.
Turning to possible solutions, apparently, a key remedy to this situation would be in the hands of high-ranking officials; to put it simply, if this problem is expected to be tackled, the summits of countries are required to make dramatic changes in their domestic policies with the aim of providing talented ones with better living conditions, such as free healthcare and schooling for their families and high rate of income. By doing this, they will be more enthusiastic to stay in their fatherland, resulting in taking advantage of their capabilities. Moreover, if individuals are determined to give up their own countries at any circumstances, not only are they advised to boost their general knowledge of the targeted country, but they are also needed to master their language so as to adapt to a new environment as quickly as possible.
To conclude, in spite of numerous challenges which the migration of experts poses, they are probable to be handled by adopting suitable steps by both individuals and governors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
...dividuals and society; therefore, it is absolutely essential to take appropriate measures to address...
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Line 5, column 783, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...re also needed to master their language so as to adapt to a new environment as quickly a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, such as, in spite of, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1553133515 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05065423315 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553133514986 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.113191504 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.0 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3636363636 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188291177909 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701485716891 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045162188501 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927291102503 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784166614339 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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