An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries.
What are the problems associated with and some possible solutions?
Many white-collar workers who are employed in underdeveloped and developing countries are moving to affluent nations, possibly because of the lucrative job options and better work condition. There are, however, several factors which do not work in its favour. This essay in the forthcoming paragraphs will discuss the issues linked to it and provide a possible solution of this trend.
Brain drain has become a rising problem nowadays because of relatively stagnant salary and gruelling schedule, but this approach is impeding the economic growth and inhibiting the chances of lifting the standard of living. Lack of veterans in training centres has hampered the quality education which resulted in acquisition of poor knowledge amongst the learners. For example, many doctors, teachers and other working professionals do not have enough understanding about the fundamentals of areas of their expertise. Hence, jeopardising the future of the next generation.
I believe, this situation can be tackled by the provision of high pay, respect, satisfactory infrastructure and adequate work facilities these professionals deserve. Though it seems elusive to suffice all the needs, however, most of it can be easily accomplished. For instance, if these experts are not criticised and paid comparatively attractive income, they might consider staying in their homeland, in addition to that, people should be educated to appreciate their efforts and time they devote, leaving their comforts. Therefore, to hold the talent where it originated from, joint efforts ought to be taken. It can only be curbed if the above mentioned are followed.
To conclude, it is advocated that a plight of a country can be improved only then when every individual participate in its growth. A nation thrives with its people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47670250896 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99253749119 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663082437276 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1027953162 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.142857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15895248448 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419978751992 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410606674856 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862301449005 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305667161925 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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