An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
Of late, migrating to other nations for better opportunity is becoming a trend and it has been prevailing concern in significant part of the world. A sea change has been witnessed that there is a tendency of move forward to the level of the countries are accruing among the doctors, teachers and many more professions. The following paragraphs would elucidate possible problems and propose a handful of remedial measures.
To commence with the problems, the first and foremost one is under developing country cannot overcome from the economic tragedy which ultimately increases not only the unemployment ratio but also criminal activity. Secondly, it would be difficult to stay in the global market so they have too dependent on their ally nations for financial aid and it is Deemed to be more difficult for poorer country to become a developed nation.
Another problem is yet to be explained like, people of this country suffer from lacking prima-facie amenities such as better education system better medical facilities proper infrastructure which are rudimentary rights of those people. Consequently, it increases the illiteracy rate and mortality rate. To quote an example, recent research of WHO has been proven that the mortality rate among the developing countries is way higher than developed countries.
Undoubtedly, every lock has a key. Tantamountly, some solution should be implemented. governments have to provide better facilities and opportunity for such professionalism and giving latest state-of-the-art equipment for their research. Moreover, it should be the responsibility of every person to serve for the nation in every possible way.
To recapitulate, I would like to state that the government and individuals, both put their foot forward to work together in order to curb this menace.
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- An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries What problems do this cause What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation 79
- An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries What problems do this cause What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51590106007 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08094383443 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4101547026 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18488643803 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542362214078 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389475652232 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923891225243 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374228207951 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.