Burden of traffic and pollution is climbing up day by day and it cannot be change the direction nowadays. Traffic and pollution is one big fat major problem in cities. This all things affect to humankind and for them to live on this planet it becomes more threaten for them. My own view on the matter is the best way to peak petrol price to clarify the growing traffic and pollution problems.
On the one hand, petrol price should be grow. People will than only know the value of natural resources and they will use within their own boundaries. Moreover, number of vehicles in increasing day by day. People have two to three cars and one to two motorbikes in each house nowadays,that means per person they have vehicles. If people will jump more on vehicles,they will themselves spoil the environment around them. The number of vehicle will increase,there will be more use toh fuel and that will destroy the environment year after year. To examplify, government should strictly make a law that in each house there should be no more than one motorcycle and two cars. If they have they have to pay fine for that. If any person in taking a car on loan and if he has two cars and he is planning to take third car than insurance company should not provide him a loan for a car.
Furthermore, if there is high number of vehicles in cities there will be more traffic and traffic which is climbing more high and high every year. People get differently in travelling because of traffic. They get late on job sometimes and if an ambulance want to rush out from traffic but sometimes they don’t get space to go out from traffic and paients die in ambulance because he do not get proper treatment and they cannot get space to go to hospital. To cite an example, one law that government has introduced in capital of India that odd number plate vehicles should go on one and even on one day and vice versa to reduce the traffic and pollution but it fails. However, it should be again come out and it should not be only in Delhi but it should also there in metropolitan cities.
In my view the measures that should be affective to solve the problem is people should use cycle to go on any other place or by walking. If they do so, they will be fit and healthy and they can leave 10 years more long. For example, electrical vehicle is available they can use that it is simple and unique to use and it is pollution free.
To put all together, if strict laws on vehicle is implemented than it would change the environment and makes your surrounding clear. I would suggest that people use more eco-friendly things which are not harmful to environment Pelople should prefer bicycle or electronic vehicle which is best to use and protect the environment .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, third, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 7.85571142285 331% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 31.0 10.4138276553 298% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 497.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53923541247 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49918939779 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43661971831 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7132562267 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0869565217 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6086956522 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52173913043 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120460336771 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044498852505 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570866179301 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778690639179 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533988382212 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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