Today,females are competing males in each and every part of the work. University should accept each students in every student whether it is a male or female. I strongly agree to this statement.
Firstly,in a universities there are plathora number of students come to study. Now,females also get chance for further studies. Universities should accpect the males and females equally in each subject. They do differentiate between male and female and they do not do any partiality with women and not giving the subject which she like.
May be she may strong enough to compete with male student in class. For example,if a girl is excellent ni science and male is weak and instated toh that he got selected than it’s unfair with girls to study and they will feel demotivated.
Furthermore, nowadays girls are more studiose than boys. Girls studies and they make their parents proud and they get rank in any of the exams and make their university at top rank. Girls are not only good in particular subjects they are good in each and every subject. To illustrate,a girl did not accepted in one of her favourite subject and that subject was there in university and she want to take that subject but they did not gave after that a girl help a boy in that subject and a boy had done good in that subject and after that university get to known that this girl has has done tremendous job and they feel bad because they did not accpect the girl in which she was was excellent.
Moreover,some universities provide less seats for girls and more for boys. They think that female is not capable of studying so they don’t no allow more seats for females. To examplify,in engineering colleges most of the seats are filled with boys but,today competition has increased and girls also take admission and beat the boys in class.
To sumup, according to the ability of students they should give seats to the students. They can not see it is girl or a boy, if they are capable enough than they must give. In my opinion, the discrimination between girl and a boy which is happening that should be avoided and every knowledgeable and capable students should get chance to show their performance of each subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7578125 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62586662075 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450520833333 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.7139884186 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1578947368 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249823223914 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101562137201 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101483053119 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164108018964 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124614033693 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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