Petrol is important as it is the energy source of vehicles. Thus, some people may reckon that raising the price of petrol is able to release the serious circumstance of the traffic system and air pollution, but I believe that this statement is inefficiency to solve the problems.
To begin with, while the way of raising the cost of petrol may reduce the driving intent of the vehicle driver, we should know that the type of vehicle is changing to electricity instead of petrol now. So, the traditional vehicle will be outdated by the latest generation and the significance of arising petrol’s price will be lower. Also, the vehicle owners would not be affected by this suggestion since there are all rich person as far as they own their car, thus, the obstruction of high price is not a feasible strategy. Therefore, the increasing traffic as well as the poor air cannot release by the above suggestion.
There are several plans to release the traffic and pollutions situation. An international example would be strong support that road management in China. The government is managing the usage of the road by restricting half of the drivers who just allow to drive on assigned days, such as from Monday to Thursday, which reflection of the above measurement is positive that it drops the crowded environment on the road as well as release the flue gas comes from vehicles. Thus, the recommendation of restricting driving days may be the best way to solve a serious environment.
In conclusion, as the result of raising the petrol’s price may not obvious, I strongly disagree with this statement and I reckon that controlling road traffic is better than the original method.
- The tables below give information abou sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The pie chart below shows the main reason why agriculture land becomes less productive. The table shows how these effected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compar 11
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wish. Other people believe that it is importa 78
- The plan below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 61
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 430, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'people', 'persons'?
Suggestion: people; persons
...his suggestion since there are all rich person as far as they own their car, thus, the...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44559967885 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556776556777 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5654260277 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193380614647 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744197690851 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351014532085 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1187229524 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135081013951 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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