Whether each citizen or organization is the one to take responsibility for altering the environment is hot-debated in our complicated society these days. Although many hold that it is the large companies, rather than individuals, have more effective impacts on the environment, I strongly disagree with this statement and believe the positive changes in the environment need much efforts from both of them.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that governments and big companies have an integral part in contributing to the environment. Actions must be taken as soon as possible to minimize the negative impacts arising from environmental damage. If all the waste from factories is put into recycled process, these companies could gain lots of long-term benefits. Not only can recycling mitigate the severe water pollution from dumping waste into the river, but it also saves natural resources exhausting. Besides, there is a crucial task of strict policy for local authorities. Implementing the law of environment and then punishing individuals or organizations… might be suggested ways. Those policies could be adopted in a vast array of fields including energy resources or natural habitat.
On the other hand, impacts from individuals could also contribute to the preservation of the government. Awareness might be the first thing to be utterly enhanced in society. Every citizen should be willing to follow some behavior modifications, however small, has great importance. For instance, disposal of household waste might be sorted based on their features and divided into types such as organic waste, recyclable rubbish. It is also essential for people to be receptive to their government, thus they could easily comply with proper policy and propose their opinions. A national leader, despite having much power, could only approve a law with entire support from ordinary citizens.
In conclusion, people acting as participants bring about the change by accumulated efforts while the government and companies play a leading role in environmental challenges. Our planet needs the collaboration between individuals and groups to be ecological and balanced.
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 87
- Every year several languages die out Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 89
- In many countries imprisonment is the most common solution to crimes However some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or working a foreign country Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language Discuss both these views and give your o 89
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only governments and large companies can make a difference To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many holds'.
Suggestion: many holds
...omplicated society these days. Although many hold that it is the large companies, rather ...
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Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ositive changes in the environment need much efforts from both of them. On the one ...
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Line 2, column 655, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Might
...unishing individuals or organizations… might be suggested ways. Those policies could...
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Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... entire support from ordinary citizens. In conclusion, people acting as particip...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... groups to be ecological and balanced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50750750751 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0634339998 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630630630631 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3442799063 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.882352941 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924509184507 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284812465238 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282953891909 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059262600359 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024947330432 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.