Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the major issue that concerns almost every person around the world is deteriorating environmental conditions. In response to this, it is considered to that these maladies cannot be harnessed by the people and, regime and big companies are the one who can ease these problems. As for me, I believe is not the matter of who can do what, rather it is more about collaborative efforts to protect the environment.
To safeguard the mother nature, humans can do umpteen number of activities like planting trees, use green products, lower the factors enhancing the pollution levels and so on. For beginners, efforts done at small level by hundreds or thousands of people can easily change the situation on a wider scale. For instance, it is hypothesized by the many environmentalists that every single tree or plant planted by the person can cut the detrimental affects of deforestation globally. Moreover, an another obvious solution is to reduce pollution by buying environment friendly goods along with halting any other activity which harms or contaminate the nature.
As for the government and large companies, they can support the people in their travel of keeping environment safe from maladies. What authorities can do, is make policies or scheme which supports the people protecting nature along with penalizing the one's who do not do so. On the other hand, organisations can create more green commodities and use less environment damaging methods of production to aid the people on their path of environment protection.
To encapsulate, protecting the nature is the responsibility almost all the people on the earth and every single step, even a minor one can be a big step or make a huge leap in the alleviation of increasing environmental problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an obvious' or 'another obvious'.
Suggestion: an obvious; another obvious
...ts of deforestation globally. Moreover, an another obvious solution is to reduce pollution by buyi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, as for, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13148788927 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05203257499 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584775086505 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.4550709362 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.818181818 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238174273128 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920989075175 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071729770884 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142669379914 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561731420321 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.