Discoveries and unbelievable scientific inventions were achieved by individuals in the past. Environmental issues sprung up only in this 21st century. If scientists can conduct exploration in other planets, i strongly believe that they know how to save this gifted planet and to protect their environment. I am optimistic that either they might have already identified the solutions or must be working towards the solutions for improving their environment. I will discuss in the following section with few key points to substantiate my position.
The root cause of this problem emanated from globalization. Due to globalization, governments encouraged industries to flourish around the world. Every government's interest of any developing, developed country was to uplift their economy at any cost. This unilateral thinking blinded the governments from taking care of their very own planet. Governments should have banned the production of non bio-degradable products like plastics, glass, tins, nuclear wastes etc. long ago and promoted usage of bio-degradable products like paper, cloth, organic materials etc. Contrarily, Governments supported the corporate companies by getting their share of income and gave them a free hand entailing to air, water, land, noise pollution.
For example, Indian government allowed Dove Chemicals to operate in Bhopal resulting in Bhopal gas tragedy. Sterlite industries which caused pollution in Tuticorin was shutdown by the state government after huge public protests. Chernobyl nuclear plant disaster in Russia resulted due to the lack of safety framework by government. USA quite recently backed out of the global climate change summit citing various reasons.
As a solution to safeguard our environment, common man is capable of restoring the environment back its normalcy. Even though government comes with stringent policies, the mindset of every individual had changed in this 21st century in order to care of their environment. Individuals have already taken up their responsibility and they started doing their part in daily routine life like reducing their daily wastage, growing trees, limiting the usage of non bio-degradable products like plastic materials, organic products usage, power saving and less power consuming products would make a huge difference in protecting the world. To clean their environment, people started funding the environmental organizations and environmentalists started doing their job effectively. "Go Green" and "Save trees" are famous slogans which got stuck into the people minds. For example, with the help of environmentalists, people started cleaning their lakes, beaches, roads etc. Government also came up the program like Clean India, Ganga river cleaning project etc. to promote the need for taking care of our environment.
Hence i strongly agree and conclude that the common man is aware of all the consequences of global warming, drought, cyclones, tsunami, earth quakes. Since people already faced the wrath of the mother earth, it's better to leave it to the individuals to find out the solution for this environmental problems as they own the issue.
- Nowadays more and more people prefer to buy fashionable clothes. Does this have positive or negative effect. Give reasons and examples to support your answer. 89
- Many people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people believe this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others suggest it will cause stress in the home. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments andlarge companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree ordisagree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: All
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...e change summit citing various reasons. As a solution to safeguard our environme...
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Suggestion: products'; product's
...roducts like plastic materials, organic products usage, power saving and less power cons...
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Suggestion: Hence,
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...mental problems as they own the issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2700.0 1615.20841683 167% => OK
No of words: 476.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67226890756 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05220507078 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 176.041082164 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605042016807 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 823.5 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8188356116 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.846153846 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144747017191 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346510636193 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287351908701 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703004574439 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305200149298 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 78.4519038076 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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