In the 21st century, fashion has overtaken the world. What was once seen as a basic need (clothing) has now turned into a style in this era. If some one cannot catch up with the latest fashion trend, they are considered as outdated. Overall the attitude and mindset of today's people changed overwhelmingly towards their clothing. In my view, i strongly accord to the fact that buying fashionable clothes brings a positive effect to people. I will substantiate my position by throwing some light in the following section with valuable reasons.
Firstly, the buying power of a common man increased to think about not only his sophistication to his belongings but also to his own beauty through fashionable attire. People wanted to have social status which entailed to proliferation of of branded products to cover wide range of customers based on their economic status. Secondly, technological advancements particularly in IT industry and its expansion across the globe brought about a huge shift in the mind set of people to prefer wearing fashionable clothes. Thirdly, fashionable clothes lifts the overall morale and confidence of a person in this trendy world. Hence in today's world, corporate companies allow their employees to wear casuals with certain dress code guidelines.
On the other hand external factors such as globalization, cultural exchanges between countries, attractive advertisements in mass media, mass production, modernization in textile industry has pushed the people to get migrated to fashionable clothes. This should be seen as an sheer dynamics of economics which boosts economic growth of a country. Although there are demerits of fashion such as pollution, wastage of money on fashionable clothes, those can still be outweighed by the merits of buying fashionable garments.
Hence i would conclude that fashion should be seen as futuristic rather than a tool to replace the tradition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34653465347 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9593895806 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640264026403 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1157363332 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187671822735 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567846397287 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389238562799 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996608126515 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398261099469 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.