Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to extinction of species and loss of biodiversity
What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
Problems related to the environment have been immense concerns of billions of humans all over the world: The degradation of biodiversity has been an interest of debate for years. This essay will demonstrate some ways in which humans are destroying the environment before outlining several viable solutions to mitigate this situation
To start with, It is undeniable that the burning of fossil fuels in transportation and production releases carbon dioxide into the atmosphere which leads to severe air contamination and global warming. This is compounded by the widespread use of fuel-powered vehicles, especially cars. For instance, the rocketing rate of car ownership among middle-income Vietnamese nationals has resulted in the atmosphere in major cities being alarmingly contaminated
Besides, Forest shrinkage also attracts enough attention from the authority when forests are continuously cut down for timber exploitation and industrial development purposes. That action not only shrinks habitat for the wildlife but also causes soil problems such as erosion and degradation. Additionally, the most serious consequence is that this state will lead to a higher extinction rate and loss of biodiversity
Facing up to these great issues, some viable solutions need carrying out. Firstly, the government should encourage citizens to use environmentally friendly methods of transportation like cycling or walking and promote the use of public transports among citizens. Secondly, the authorities should increase education and organize more campaigns in different channels ranging from tv to the internet to raise public awareness about environmental problems
In conclusion, with all the aforementioned activities of humans, it is understandable why humans are the major cause of the loss of biodiversity. Moreover, it is proposed that all solutions must be adopted to reduce maximum consequences
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- Influence of human beings on the world s ecosystem is leading to extinction of species and loss of biodiversity What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity What solutions can you suggest 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80714285714 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23289060017 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.657317668 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.666666667 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1111111111 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149558140287 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550060353101 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508289655476 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772887182849 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048178425216 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.01 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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