Information technology is changing many aspect of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
The development of technology alters people’s daily life in order to bring impact positively for working, spending free time, and dominating home. However, the demerits cannot outbalance aforementioned merits.
It is believed that the advance technology has a positive effect in some occupations immensely due to virtual meeting. Although a negativity to work virtually is to suffer from some voice disturbances, especially from relatives’, this does not influence the positivity because working from home has a tendency to communicate to family intensely every day. For instance, when IT professionals have to meet by accessing a teleconference application, such as ZOOM, they are able to keep in touch with children and wife because of staying in the house in a full day. If the children yell loudly, this will be solved by creating a new room which is only for occupying.
Thanks to technology development, it reveals another immense impact to access easily to a number of entertainments beneficially. Nevertheless, this sedentary activity to spend leisure time by surfing information on the Internet originate physical issues, just like an obesity. Nonetheless, the benefit is more influence because of increasing mental health by watching funny video. According to a survey in 2020, the rate of bad mental sufferers in Indonesia decreased from 15% to 10% since accessing YouTube to watch some comedy channels has an ability to reduce stress, having a tendency to incline a hormone to develop mental resilience. Therefore, it is better for mental growth to cope with hard situations.
In conclusion, it is true that information technology originates many benefits for teleworking and entertaining, which surpass the detrimental impacts. Where possible, people should balance between productive and leisure time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51785714286 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17465850646 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.061703972 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.846153846 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144395518757 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478854918456 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529360118687 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951194247316 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421320030843 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.