Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
The logistic industry has seen progress in recent decades as it is playing an increasingly irreplaceable role in daily activities of people. Although there are certain shortcomings of this change, I believe those are outweighed by its tangible merits.
For one thing, a noticeable ramification of the over-reliance on those devices is the lack of interaction among our society. Seemingly evident that technology is revolutionary, which could be able to close a gap between humans regardless of any geographical constraints, its convenience is steadily replacing face-to-face communication of people. With an array of features, namely video conferences or unlimited calls and instant messages, users will not have to travel long distances to see each other. Yet, this could conversely engender a psychological gap while relationships are only maintained through online channels instead of being shaped by confabulations and interactions. Hence, the inherent emotional values of human being could gradually disappear from this world within a firm.
For another, this transition toward modernization is believed to be beneficial to the result-oriented society. Undoubtedly, exchanging job-related information could be facilitated in the cyber world and spread at a higher degree among staff within the company. Since conventional communication methods such as calls and face-to-face conferences cannot provide sufficient time to address the problems of business, especially to time-conscious people when they have to attend such a meeting at a regular interval. By utilizing the conveniences of online meetings, individuals could contribute to the discussion more effectively with graphic and statistics on virtual presentation and thus, save a huge amount of time which is used for traveling long distances to the workplace. Both of which could finally result in boosted efficiency of workers and improved quality of work.
To conclude, the disadvantages of the information technology revolution are clear, however, I believe that it is overtaken by the benefits it brought to our lives.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, in short, such as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74276527331 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39168096333 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636655948553 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8410589863 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.384615385 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101372759625 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383330699526 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701261938853 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945254603152 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102455443936 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, in short, such as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74276527331 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39168096333 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636655948553 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8410589863 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.384615385 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101372759625 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383330699526 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701261938853 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945254603152 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102455443936 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.