Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent year there is too much development in technology occurs and life is getting affected by it at faster rate. In every sector technology is the turning point. I agree that there are many advantages of Information technology but there are some disadvantages too which i will discuss in below paragraphs.
On the one hand, Information technology have a lot advantages. Earlier distance is the main factor for the communication but with advancement in information technology people are getting more social by having access to connect with each and every person around the globe. This makes our work meetings to connect globally. In addition to this, Education sector is mostly effect by technology. A lot of online learning platforms are available, which is major boon for students precisely. Moreover, Entertainment sector is taking new turn by advancement in technology. Now people have faster access to a lot of web series, movies and many more.
Despite many advantages information technology have some disadvantages too. Firstly, Spending long hours on daily basis have adverse effect on health. Not only health issues but spending long hours on technology may lead to cause stress. Secondly, Children have access to adult sites which is not good for the society and may lead to disruption in their studies. People are getting inactive because of the ease of doing their work.
In conclusion, I believe that due to Information Technology human life is more comfortable but its has come up with some cons. Therefore, the benefits of information technology surely outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... there are some disadvantages too which i will discuss in below paragraphs. On...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25680933852 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94479273745 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556420233463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9281122568 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4705882353 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243907446562 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826939945728 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697937626249 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154987798683 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278101041843 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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