Information technology is changing many aspects of our life and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages ?
In present era, advancement in technology becomes proliferate day by day, due to which information technology alternate numerous trends of lives. Therefore, this represents dominant impact on accomodation, leisure and work tasks. Thus, benefits of this criteria outweigh demerits in maximum count and reasons are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, advancement in science sector plays crucial role in present era. Because, innovations and progression is proliferated with rapid speed which represents great impact on all tasks of lives wheather it is home, leisure or job. There are numerous merits due to y this happens. First and foremost factor is development towards success. Because, in all work sections which includes business, industrialisation or trade so on. Employees become more viable to reveal presentation and documentary tasks in relevant views without any perplex and irrelevancy method. Due to which, they complete their duties in superior manner which leads toward progression in business sector and are also results in proportion of employees. As a result, this becomes positive aspect for both business sections and workers of that community.
Furthermore, another prominent factor is comfortability of lives. Because, due to development of technology regards informative skill, there are plethora of favourable facilities and services which are provided to public. Therefore, lifestyle of individuals become more comfortable and convinient. Such services include hospitality, education and transportation so on which plays vital role in contemporary era. In addition, infrastructure also become develop which leads to progress in building structure. Due to which, building and accommodation build with more superior materials which becomes durable during natural disasters to. Thus, individuals are secured in their homes at period of catastrophic situations which results to domain advantages of technology rather than unfavourable aspects.
To recapitulate, according to my outlook, technology represents preferable aspects regard work, infrastructure and leisure so on. Because, advancement in such tasks become prominent which alters lifestyle of individuals with numerous benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, thus, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00943396226 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20719106421 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0489300835 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.55 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121618145478 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377827493912 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512212662879 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983373080096 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603854774516 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.28 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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