There has been a worrying trend that the people of the cosmos suffer from the hungry situation, despite the advancement made in the agricultural sector. This trend can be ascribed by number of reasons and it must be addressed by definite actions.
The first and foremost reason is that youngsters give more preference to other professions like working in industries as well as companies because they sumrise that the production of food is a uphill task and it requires more hard work . As a result , the farmers is decreased in agricultural sector thus they do not produce eatables things at high level . For instance, a recent survey conducted by an eminent researcher Dr. Richard Brown at Stanford University of California revealed that more than 80% young individuals move to others sectors for working purposes instead of agriculture field.
The second worth mentioning reason here is that the price of eatable things are very high in some parts of the globe . Therefore, people who lived below the poverty line, they can not afford it. As a result, they are suffered from this hungry problem . Moreover, sometimes the production of food is destroyed , due to unpredictable climate change as well as some natural disasters like floods and droughts . So the farmers do not fulfill their food requirements of masses of country and families.
A number of strong measures must be implemented to tackle this sensitive issue. The first solution is that the government should encourage to new generation to work in agricultural field and pursue it as profession by providing some grants and facilities. Another feasible solution is that law maker should reduce the prices of food . So everyone can afford it. Besides this , they provide facilities and supply of food to the needy ones at the time of flood and drought .
To conclude, there are number of reasons why despite the advancement made in agriculture, the masses of whole the world suffer from the hungry situation and it can be tackled by number of remedies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04191616766 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75772674271 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550898203593 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7188384585 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199092856692 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675705422593 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707961215316 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12910299221 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774336974954 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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